room 317 is a finished, complete novel about a man who has lost everything that was ever important to him – his wife, kids, job, friends, everything. he fell from being an admired teacher to an ostracized and unwanted embarrassment. unfortunately, nobody but he knows his innocence, that he was the target of a vengeful plot formulated by a jealous and deceptive woman whom he unknowingly crossed.
unable to remain anywhere near his home because of the widespread coverage of his downfall, he boards a bus with two intentions: first, to see as much of the country as possible on the way to the arizona desert, and two, to make that desert his final resting place by taking his own life.
however, his plan is disrupted when he meets a few interesting people aboard the westward bus. there’s a young man with a short temper and a backpack that he guards closely. there’s the young man’s companion, a girl, barely 19, who does not seem to be willingly taking part in the lucrative but dangerous direction in which her boyfriend is taking her. last, there’s the single mother and child who represent the family that john lost but will probably never have again.
it would be easy for john to ignore these other characters and carry out his simple suicide plan that would close out the shame and misery that his life had become. but how often can we say that the easy way is the best way out?
19 total chapters…




Starting.
You have my attention.
Now I am curious… I will read each day a little bit… Keep on writing , you are very very good!!!!
and you are very smart! (thanks, sheepishly)
I have no idea if I’m smart… but I sure am curious, that’s why I love cats…
my name is Ela.
hi ela. i love cats too. i once had three at one time but now just one dog. i prefer cats though.
well, I posted few days ago something about cats… I love them, no idea why, just love them… they are selfish like children, warm, wise, very skilled…. cat owners are great people, solitary, inteligent, bohemian… a bit like the little tiger also…
and there’s a poem in there.
no, it was more of an essay, not a poem
http://memyselfandela.wordpress.com/2012/04/06/this-is-a-story-about-cats/
Hooked. I’ll comment as I go
and that chapter needs a good revision. it’s hard to follow, but i guess not that hard. thanks.
i’ll look forward to your comments. and that’s the second time today i’ve been called a hooker.
I didn’t call you a hooker, more that I fell hook, line and sinker. I’m ignoring my other Richard (Russo) to read you tonight and he’s a Pulitzer Prize Winner so hold your head high. Oh, and, you look a bit like Orlando Bloom in your avatar photo
That’s a big compliment!
Oh that’s not you LOL – damn tiny pictures on my iPhone.
hee hee. not me. sorry!
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I’ll give your book “Room 317″ a try. It sounds like a really interesting concept and I love dramas!
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
thank you. it starts out a little rough in the first chapter. by rough – i mean it needs revising. and it’s my only story – so far – that doesn’t involve paranormal/horror things. please feel free to give critical feedback.
Okay. I’ll make it a part of my reading challenge, so I’ll do a book review on my blog for ya. Your “Lizzie’s Journal” sounded cool too, so if I like this one, I’ll probably try that one too.
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
statements like your make me smile plenty.
This sounds interesting. Funny, it reminds me of where my brain goes every time I take the train. It’s like a reflex thought: there’s some natural disaster and that only us in this car are left. I have to choose who will be my best friend, who will be my love interest, and who will be the villain. Your book sounds much better than my game. Best of luck to you.
That’s a wonderful thing to say. Thanks.
I’m intrigued….I’ll have to check this one out, too!
I’ll warn you that the main character does a lot of reminiscing. Probably 35% of the story. Does it to help reader understand the choices he makes through the story.
Just finished…Overall – a great read. Would like to have seen the nasty little bitch get hers, but she better watch for the karma truck!
The quick tryst in the bathroom with John and Paula – would haved loved to see that go a little further, scene needed it (or I did).
Hated Bob with a passion, ended up disliking Paula immensely for giving in…but with kids involved, understandable. Figure Bob ‘knew’ enough well connected people in his line of work to be able to be such an effective spy…wish John had kicked his ass!
Hoody and Bunny were very real…great visuals on them. I thought after a while she was muling drugs…but your story line for them was good.
Did think it a little unrealistic how talkative and forthcoming the goons were when John was in the room…but we needed to know what was behind the whole thing.
Room for lots of drama there in that room…would have been a difficult scene to write I’m sure, but warranted?
Charlotte is a great character, drawn so well and so true for one her age. Very nicely done.
I thought the ending perfect…though a small role, Grandma was a nice touch. I love a feisty, no nonsense, humored old gal.
Such is a review from an avid reader, non professional. Hope you don’t mind.
To repeat, a great read…enjoyed it very much. Glad it’s part of my electronic library.
R
wow thanks. i greatly appreciate not only the detail of your thoughts but also that you were able and willing to stick with the whole story. thanks again very much.
Never a question about sticking with it Rich. It’s a great story…with rich characters (no pun intended). I look forward to my time with the next one…Lizzie’s Journal.
great thanks and thanks again miss.